This story won me some money recently, and there is some talk of it being published too, as part of an anthology. Anyway, neither of those will concern you as much as the morbidity in the story. So grab something to to munch on and enjoy The Perfect Closure :D
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As the sky grew dark outside, Sheetal sat by her window, sipping her coffee that had long gone cold. She shivered a little, the coffee providing no warmth, and hugged herself tightly. She took one long last look at the growing darkness and stood up, closed the window and faced the unlit room. Meandering around objects that she couldn’t possibly see in the dark, she made her way to kitchen, rinsed the cup and placed it in the sink.
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As the sky grew dark outside, Sheetal sat by her window, sipping her coffee that had long gone cold. She shivered a little, the coffee providing no warmth, and hugged herself tightly. She took one long last look at the growing darkness and stood up, closed the window and faced the unlit room. Meandering around objects that she couldn’t possibly see in the dark, she made her way to kitchen, rinsed the cup and placed it in the sink.
Back in the room, she switched on the little night lamp, and
by its feeble light, saw the body that lay next to the couch. These last few
years, she had loved him with all her heart. And now, he was dead. All those
years of loving and caring came to nothing, it seemed. All she was left with
was a hole in her heart and dead body to deal with. Thankless bastard, she
thought to herself, leaving her all alone to deal with the mess he left behind.
She sat down on the floor next to the body, and held the lifeless
head in her lap. It wasn’t her fault that he was dead. She knew he had a weak
heart, and she alone knew how much of her meagre salary she had already spent
on his health. She knew, somewhere in the back of her mind, that it was only a
matter of time, but she had constantly put the thought away in some recesses of
her brain that she never accessed. So, expected as it was, the death came as
quite a blow.
Such a transient thing, life, she thought. We are born, we
live, we eat, we love, we hurt, we die. And if we are reborn, we do it all over
again. What is the point anyway?
As she sat in the feeble light of the night lamp in the grip
of existentialist thoughts and feeling a sense of great loss, she heard a
rumbling sound. She looked up with surprise, and then realised that it was her
stomach signalling hunger. Drawn back to the reality of everyday bodily
matters, she once again wondered what she should do with the body of her dog.
She considered burying it, but couldn’t bear the thought of maggots eating away
at her dear Monty. She couldn’t just dump it some place remote, for that would
be too cruel to the one being she had loved selflessly. She definitely couldn’t
afford a cremation. And she sure as hell couldn’t just leave it lying next to
the couch.
Picking it up, Sheetal took it to the kitchen and put it
down on the table. Rummaging through her refrigerator, trying to decide what to
cook for dinner, she realised that she was all out of groceries, except a
carrot which was hardly sufficient dinner. She took it out anyway, washed it
clean, sat down on a chair facing the body, and began munching on it, while
trying to decide what to do about dinner and the body on the table.
And then, it struck her. Sheer genius, she thought, and
whimsical as it may seem, it was surely a great idea to eternalise her love for
Monty while solving two of her more immediate concerns.
When the meal was over, and she had put away a substantial
amount of leftovers, she made herself some more coffee and went back to her
window to stare at the darkness outside. In the clear night sky, she traced
Orion and Taurus, and thought of Monty’s soul up there in the sky. She tried to
conjure up another constellation in his memory, and when she failed at that,
she tried to pick a star that would always remind her of him.
Satisfied with a bright star a bit off Orion, she felt a
double sense of contentment. No matter where she was, she only had to look up
at the sky to see Monty in the unnamed star she had picked for him. And no
matter where she was, she had to only rub her stomach to remember that Monty
would forever and always be a part of her.
Sheetal couldn’t have asked for a better closure.

5 comments:
Now that you have won, you must give me a treat.
Hyok hyok hyok! Good read, dude!
I always wonder what happens to all the treats that are given out without reason. Do they get put down to the non-existent generosity of my black heart? :P
This reminds me of the chicken that my Mom had not too long ago.
A sweet little thing.
She is how I learned that a 'desi murgi' tastes so much better compared to broiler.
Now,after reading for the second time, I got it.
What we have discussed in the yesterday meeting, the so called 'suspense' is all there in this story :)
Glad to read this.
You are probably the only person who read it twice. I think most people had enough after the first time. :P
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